I think there are two stories in this photo, the one I like very much is the bottom one with the boy, girls and the pool , maybe it was better if you cropped the top part , the jungle I mean.
3 Sep 2007 12:37pm
@payam: I take your point, but I didn't want to focus entirely on the children as that might have been interpreted as encroaching on their privacy. For that reason I chose to keep the upper part to show them in a wider context. I could have made a different crop which would have left out the scenery above but included more of the scene to the left which had some adults therein.
I really appreciate your comment as it does make me think about why I did it this way.